Eager Slave is my favorite, and I found myself going into a bigger smile the longer I read! So true, our need of noise. But also true is our need to escape it. I’ll re-read these poems looking for a different mood.
I enjoyed your poetry (though not your line spacing, shape it up, lol). One of your poems made me think of this song. You may or may not enjoy it, but it’s a Sharing Sunday. https://youtu.be/UrgpZ0fUixs?si=jGvgUV9BCxApf2jB
I have to shorten the lines or people reading them on mobile will get the lines all cut up weirdly! A few lines on mobile are still cut up and now on two lines 😭
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Thanks!
I guess sometimes I do like poetry, she ventured in hesitant appreciation. 😅
Eager Slave is my favorite, and I found myself going into a bigger smile the longer I read! So true, our need of noise. But also true is our need to escape it. I’ll re-read these poems looking for a different mood.
Thanks for the thoughtful response! 🥰
I enjoyed your poetry (though not your line spacing, shape it up, lol). One of your poems made me think of this song. You may or may not enjoy it, but it’s a Sharing Sunday. https://youtu.be/UrgpZ0fUixs?si=jGvgUV9BCxApf2jB
I have to shorten the lines or people reading them on mobile will get the lines all cut up weirdly! A few lines on mobile are still cut up and now on two lines 😭
It’s the double spacing that bugs my brain. I don’t know about the formatting issues here, tbh though.
Keep doing what you’re doing. I’m not trying to be a bitch (I just naturally succeed at it!). Keep rocking. 💕
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